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Tom Gates: Excellent Excuses (and Other Good Stuff)

by Liz Pichon · Tom Gates #2

A diary-doodle comedy about an ordinary British boy whose creative excuses and artistic talents collide with school, siblings, and an unexpected standing ovation.

Kid
65
Parent
55
Teacher
60
Best fit: ages 7-10 Still works: ages 6-11 Lexile 610L

The story

Tom Gates narrates his life through an illustrated diary crammed with doodles, lists, and capitalized emphasis. When his teacher exposes a creative excuse about a homework-eating dog, Tom must redo his review before earning a sleepover at his best friend Derek's house. School life brings a classroom rival, a chaotic swimming lesson, and a band performance that goes better than anyone expected.

Age verdict

Perfect for 7-10. The diary format, accessible vocabulary, and light emotional content make it ideal for the primary school sweet spot. No content concerns for any age — completely safe for sensitive readers.

Our take

Entertainment-first comedy diary that excels at hooking kids and rescuing reluctant readers, with genuine creative spark for parents and strong classroom project potential for teachers. The gap reflects its comedy-first DNA — kids love the voice and humor, while parents see moderate growth value and teachers prize its gateway power over literary depth.

What stands out

Each audience's top 3 dimensions. Out of 30 scored per book.

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Kids love

  • First-chapter grab Strong

    Comparable to Lunch Lady — Both open in emotionally vivid, kid-relatable spaces with immediate stakes. Tom's letter creates dramatic irony (reader knows the excuse is fake before Tom admits it) mirroring Lunch Lady's cafeteria chaos. Sits at same tier because both immediately hook through recognisable child experience (homework trouble, school lunch) rather than fantastical premise.

  • Character voice Strong

    Comparable to City Spies — Tom's voice is as immediately distinctive as City Spies' five characters. His CAPITALISED emphasis, parenthetical honesty ('I did'), and sentence-fragment diary register make him instantly recognisable and imitable by readers. Sits at same tier because the voice is not just distinctive but functional to character and format—children report writing in Tom's style naturally after reading.

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Parents love

  • Reading gateway Exceptional

    The Sand Warrior — Tom Gates is the top reading gateway in traditional illustrated chapter books. Diary format + doodle rewards + humor-first + conversational voice removes every barrier between reluctant reader and completed book. 21-book series means gateway leads to sustained reading. Sits at 9 because format is marginally less accessible than full graphic novels, but practically equivalent for traditional book category.

  • Creative spark Strong

    Off the Hook — Tom Gates inspires sustained creative output: children widely create their own illustrated diaries after reading. Format-level invitation ('write and illustrate your own entries') matches InvestiGators' format-as-prompt. 'Delia's a Weirdo' song models creative writing within narrative. Sits at 8 because creative spark is proven and sustained, but InvestiGators (10) has slightly more design-novelty inspiration.

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Teachers love

  • Reluctant reader rescue Exceptional

    The Scarlet Shedder — Tom Gates is the strongest reluctant reader format in traditional illustrated chapter books (Dog Man beats it through pure graphic-novel format). Diary entries with short text/page, doodle rewards, humor-first approach that never feels like 'a book', conversational voice—all eliminate barriers. 21-book series means rescue leads to sustained reading. Sits at 9 because marginally less visual than full graphic novels but practically equivalent.

  • Writing prompt potential Strong

    'write and illustrate your own diary entry' is a proven classroom prompt. 'Write a parody song about someone you know' builds on Delia model. 'Describe a time your excuse turned into something good' connects thematically. Multiple prompts span creative writing, personal narrative, poetry. Sits at same tier because prompts are strong and numerous but format-dependent.

✓ Perfect for

  • Reluctant readers who need humor and visuals to stay engaged
  • Diary of a Wimpy Kid fans looking for a British alternative
  • Creative kids who love drawing and might start their own illustrated diary
  • Ages 7-10 who enjoy school-life comedy with relatable characters

Not ideal for

Readers seeking emotional depth, complex plots, or literary prose — this is entertainment-first comfort reading that prioritizes laughs and voice over narrative sophistication.

At a glance

Pages
341
Chapters
8
Words
22k
Lexile
610L
Difficulty
Easy
POV
First Person
Illustration
Fully Illustrated
Published
2011
Publisher
Scholastic
Illustrator
Liz Pichon
ISBN
9781443124393

Mood & style

Tone: Comedic Pacing: Steady Clip Weight: Light Tension: Social Threat Humor: Self Deprecating Humor: Situational

You'll know it worked when…

A child who enjoys this will likely ask for the next Tom Gates book immediately — the series has 21 titles providing months of sustained reading.

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